Line Editing
Concerned about the flow of your novel or the effectiveness of language used?
Line edits dig into a novel to create an easy-to-read novel, while keeping your unique voice and style.
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pace and flow
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sentence variation and structure
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improve language for clarity
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idioms and cliches
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overused words
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passive voice,
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nonparallel sentence construction
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occurrences of false simultaneity
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What you get
In-document Changes
I examine each line in your novel and provide you with a Tracked Changes copy of your manuscript and show how the suggested changes improve your readers' enjoyment.
Editorial Letter
You receive an editorial letter about what works well and what improvements could be made to tighten and clarify your story and message.
Post Edit Call
After you review my comments, the letter, and style sheet, we have a chat about your thoughts on them and discuss a revison plan.