Concerned about the flow of your novel or the effectiveness of language used?
Line edits dig into a novel to create an easy-to-read novel, while keeping your unique voice and style.
pace and flow
sentence variation and structure
improve language for clarity
idioms and cliches
nonparallel sentence construction
occurrences of false simultaneity
What you get
I examine each line in your novel and provide you with a Tracked Changes copy of your manuscript and show how the suggested changes improve your readers' enjoyment.
You receive an editorial letter about what works well and what improvements could be made to tighten and clarify your story and message.
Post Edit Call
After you review my comments, the letter, and style sheet, we have a chat about your thoughts on them and discuss a revison plan.