Concerned about the flow of your novel or the effectiveness of language used?
Line edits dig into a novel to create an easy-to-read novel, while keeping your unique voice and style.
pace and flow
sentence variation and structure
improve language for clarity
idioms and cliches
nonparallel sentence construction
occurrences of false simultaneity
What you get
I'll examine each line in your novel and provide you with a Tracked Changes copy of your manuscript to show suggested changes.
I'll provide you with an editorial letter about what works well and what needs improvement to tighten and clarify your story and message.
You'll get a style sheet to keep track of your characters, places, cultures, magical items, etc., so you can be sure you are staying consistent during revisions.
Post Edit Call
After you review my comments, the letter, and style sheet, we will chat about your thoughts on them and discuss your best approach to revising.