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Developmental Editing

Structural problems dragging down your novel? Want a deep-dive analysis of plot, scenes, characters, themes, and more?


Developmental edits focus on the big-picture elements of your novel.


  • Structure

  • Plot

  • Readability

  • Characters and arcs

  • Creative delivery of your intended message

  • Believability of the fictional world

  • Pacing

What you'll get

In-document Comments.

Using page-by-page in-document comments, I'll guide you through revisions while explaining your options and how each decision may affect your readers' experiences.

Editorial Letter

I'll provide you with an editorial letter about what works well and what needs improvement to tighten and clarify your story and message,

Style Sheet

You'll get a style sheet to keep track of your characters, places, cultures, magical items, etc., so you can be sure you are staying consistent during revisions.

Post Edit Call

After you review my comments, the letter, and style sheet, we will chat about your thoughts on them and discuss your best approach to revising.

Developmental Edit $3,000 for 50,000 words
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